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This is kinda a long way to draw a page but upon request of my editor he wanted me to write in the dialogue so that he can see how the flow of the page is and how it reads. This way my editor was also able to see whether some of the dialogue could be taken out or moved to other panels.I kinda like the control of where the balloon placements go and I think as a result words and pictures in this case is much more in synch. Never really done this before so I have much much more respect now for leterrers! It was rewarding in the end to have been part of other aspects aside from just drawing but it's a heck of a lot more work! Bless my editor of his patience! Oh and if I haven't said it enough times the book comes out in France May 21st 2008!
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good choice on moving the first two ballons of the second panel to the first panel :)

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*même pas mal; même pas peur ... è3é *
Amazing, amazing!!
One can learn really a lot from these pages, thanx.
I love seeing these pages, is there any way you could explain why there are panel changes and what sparked specific panel changes?

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progress is living.....

- Javier Cruz Winnik
damn do I have a lot to learn.....
any changes you see usually I was asked to make the adjustments.
you can thank my editor for that. after he saw the layouts he got a better grasp of where to improve the dialogue and move things around so it worked better. This book was actually the most collaboration I've ever had with an editor!
that sucks.... your thoughts were better=]

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progress is living.....

- Javier Cruz Winnik
damn do I have a lot to learn.....
that's so cool to hear!
I work with an editor who I have no collaboration with, and it's very, very hard -___-

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*même pas mal; même pas peur ... è3é *
yeah ultimate freedom is a double edged sword.

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